Pretty-Minded Hermits (Is the curiosity shop open today?)
I know most grown-up women would agree that a kindly and creative spirit in a man is by far his most attractive feature. Everything material that he possesses is left in the dust...
A SOUND VISION
written in August 1996
It would be a novel adventure for me
to collect your thoughts
along with all the notes you've sung --
You gave away another clue
when you sang me a few once --
You see, we all used to think you locked your worries
behind those vulnerable averted eyes...
That may be, but is it more that you
turn them away so as not to distract from
the uncommon listening way you mostly learn?
Lucky you.
I wonder, too, about the place where it first took new form...
You know, the one whose shoulder is just the right height --
who stockpiles all his pretty newborn music
like ammunition against collective future sadness
until some given hour will finally come.
Just one other thing for now...
Have you found your childhood paintings?
ISLAND CASTAWAYS
written in August 1996
One night I looked inside Greg's eyes --
only for a second, since that's all the time one has...
I saw there a doorway into some kind of wonderland that
only he himself had ever seen
I wanted to leap through it right then
in case it might slam shut
Now, like the cave dweller in Plato's allegory
I can never be happy remaining in the shadows.
2 Comments:
I think your poems are quite excellent. I also think I see some of why you seem to have such a fascination with me.
The incredibly strong hermit in me recoils from that kind of personal attention. You can see though that I crave and seek attention and look for it in other less personal ways.
A hermit who by definition never really knew how to have a close human relationship is slow to recover from a severely wounded heart. The only cure however is to attempt to teach the hermit that he is a social animal too. Human contact is vital to his own health and well being.
Let me know when you are ready and I can make some links to your blog from mine.
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Please do go ahead and make links to my blog from yours -- ready or not.
I wanted to ask you if I could do the same, but I was too shy.
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